This is the feedback I recieved from my lecturer. My lecturer advised me to change the dominant image, change the colour of the sub-head, make the slogan smaller, enlarge the banner, and possibly change the font of the main sell-line and the masthead as well.
I followed the advice given to the best of my ability and circumstances. I made the slogan smaller and enlarged the banner. I chnaged the font and colour fo the main sell-line and changed the colour of the sub-head. The dominant image had a line through it (possibly from the effects and filters I had applied to it), so I had to remove it and use the original image with no filters or effects.
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